Cartoons

toc =Alphonso=

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HeeLoooW WooRLD!!!! Umm.. Hmm.. Alphonso? What can i say..??? =) I really Liked Your cartoon..HONEST!! hahaha, It was Pretty funny ae? But I didnt get the ghost standing around holding a ice cream though. But otherwise it showed me and presented many points for reasons why women and men were unequal, and some ways it showed us what sort of things men who voted back then would of said... I dont think you need to change anything because i think you would already know ae? =)

Hehe overall i think it was pretty funny!! =)

=Ataria=

media type="custom" key="171985" Ataria had some very good aspects about her cartoon. I was impressed by the way she had executed her cartoon as well as she had without using any words (I know I couldn't do it). This gave new meaning to a picture is worth a thousand words. I also like the way that she had presed the fact that men earnt more money that women even though women done more hard work. I thought that the background for all her pictures suited perfectly to her message like the situation with the money and the background acting like a courtroom. That, for me, really emphasised her point of enequality between men and women. I know that she couldn't do the speech bubbles but I think that if she had included a title then she would have cleared somethings up for me, instead of me going to her blog to find out the meaning of some pictures. Otherwise it was a great effort. =Avjit=

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=Baldip=

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I really liked the way you thought about what could be the best reason to women suffrage because the way you mentioned about man getting all the property and the woman could not was really good. The thing you could have improved on is that you should have added some bright colours into your cartoon because when I looked at it the first time, it was really scary. You could have had a coloured house, that would have made it look better. By improving it, people would be able to read it and want to read it. Just because I mentioned something negative that doesn't mean your cartoon is bad, it was really really great and because of the dark background, it caught my attention. =Banu=

media type="custom" key="166859" = = One thing that I thought that Banu did really good in her cartoon was that she picked the appropriate pictures to go with what her point was. I think that this is really good because it gives the person looking or reading the cartoon a sense of what it is all about. One thing that she could've improved was probably the phrasing of the first cartoon box which said "I will stay at 2pm, who cares about her??" I think that rephrasing will enhance her cartoon because than it'll make better sense... (sorry Banu not being mean or judgemental but being a critical thinker :) Evaluation by: Bharti

=Bharti=

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=Camilla=

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=Damon=

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=Jacinta=

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=Mafutaga=

media type="custom" key="171387" In this cartoon, I thought the wording was very good. This is because everything made sense so I knew the answer to the question(why did women feel they have the right to vote) from looking at the cartoon. One thing I thought that could be improved was to put a extra person under the "yeah, me too" speech bubble. This will make the cartoon better because it would not look like a extra voice is comming out of nowhere. overall this cartoon was superb.

Evaluation by Michelle
=Michelle=

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The thing that I thought that was really good about Michelle's cartoon was that she had a great idea in using the way the women go up in ages because it portrays the point that the women in their earlier ages didn't have much to say but the oldest woman thought for herself and found herself equal to men. One thing that Michelle could have improved on was that she could have added a few words in the cartoon to show what the cartoon was about because at the first glance I never got what the cartoon was about or what it meant, till I read Michelle's blog. Overall a great cartoon.
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=Muzaffar=

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=Nazarene=

Well, there's no cartoon for me to actually evaluate upon, so I'll wait till it comes up. One thing I'd Nazarene to consider is that if you'll manage your time properly, you'll be able to do your homework.(I know we have HEAPS of work from school!!! and even I have to manage my time quite considerately!!) I'm waiting for your cartoon Nazarene...and if you need help, you can ask me. __Evaluation by Pallavi__

=Pallavi=

media type="custom" key="171997" I got the honor to evaluate ♥ ♀ __Pallavi's__ ♀♥ cartoon, so here it is. The really, really good bit about her cartoon; was the message that the cartoon consisted, the point of how women wanted and thought that they deserved the 'Right to Vote' was really made clear. This was shown by the fact that she has displayed to us how women were feeling in normal day situations. After a huge time of checking and analysing, one thing that would be made better was her sentence that the woman was saying, "Only we Women could vote, we would've made laws for no drinking"; I think ♥ ♀ __Pallavi__ ♀♥ missed out the word "If", which would have made the sentence - Grammar better. Otherwise it's all "A - OK". Great Work Pallavi!!! ♥ ♣ Pasa ♣ ♥

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=Rebecca=

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[Awww?? :'( Kumon Rebecca!!! I want to write an evaluation!! :(] Awwwww well, umm... Apparently, I have no cartoon to evaluate!! ..... But........ Once it is published, I WILL change my evaluation! Haha! So, all I can say now is..... There is no cartoon to evaluate, and it is very disappointing!! :-/

=Seline=

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Evaluation By ♥ Seini ♥: "HELLO ! " Well from my personal opinion, I really liked Seline's cartoon, it explained alot of reasons why women deserved to vote and, how there was a huge army of women complaining. One thing she could improve in is????????????????? uummmmmmmmm! Nothing at all. Just to put it out there! "Great work" Seline, it was very impressive I liked your idea. Just hope you will get an A Grade. ♣ ☻☺ Seini ☺☻

=Seini's Cartoon=

media type="custom" key="177555" Hey Seini, I thought that your cartoon was good because it tells me why women should have the right to vote in parliament. I think this is really good because most of the women want to vote and there are less support from the men's side and the women are giving evidence why women should vote in parliament. One thing that could be improved is that you could have put Kate Sheppards head over one of the womens head to show why Kate Sheppard wants women to vote in parliament and get support from more women. I think that this can enhance your cartoon because Kate Sheppard would be the one who protested that women should vote in parliament and get jobs and work like men. EVALUATION BY: Shaheel

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=Sevelino=

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=Tanya=

=Tramaine=

Tramaine! Aargh! Since past 5 weeks you've been putting your cartoon on this site, and I'm afraid I can't find it no-where. Now quit being lazy and do your overdue homework. You'd been holding me up for 5 weeks to do my own. I'm sure your completed work would be just fine and better than nothing under your name, if you have no idea on how to do the homework-- GET SOME HELP!

=Zaynah=

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